Shared below are the students' creative writings! They developed extended scene from either the book The Giver or 2095. Enjoy!
Ali
Jonas woke up, and to his surprise, witnessed gold.
He was exhilarated by the amazing reflection of a unique color.
He then pondered to himself, and he knew the color “Yellow”
He saw the rubies with their strong amazing color, and thought to himself “Red”
As a soothing beautiful light reflected through a hallway, he pondered what it was.
He walked through the hallway and saw Sapphires of a relaxing color.
It occurred to him that these strange jewels were “Blue”
He saw another vibrant reflection of another color. He witnessed the radiant emeralds glistening in the light and then knew that the emeralds were “Green”
Darren: Jonas hears a crescendo of intricate noises. He starts to visualize a house embossed with orange, dark brown trees full of vivid green leaves, and a bright blue sky. Apprehensively, he makes his way towards a window lined with silver and gold banners. Through the window he sees a family sitting at a dinner table. The people are dressed in exhilarating and jaunty colors. Words begin spilling out of Jonas’ mouth at an astounding rate, “Red, blue, yellow, silver, orange, green, pink, purple, black, white, cyan, magenta, grey!” Dumbfounded, he stares meticulously at his surroundings.
Camryn Brown
Inside the dwelling of the old man known as the giver, Jonas is preparing to receive yet another transmission. What would it be this time? Jonas is bubbling over with excitement! Jonas’ steps toward the bed were jaunty and confident.
Once again he felt the hand of the giver on his back. He felt the room suddenly change. It was then when he felt a light drip of water run down his face. He was in an open field. Nothing but grass as far as the eye could see. The ground was wet. Jonas pondered over what the wetness was and from where it came. He concluded that this was rain and that it came from the sky.
All of the sudden he realized that the sky was blue and the grass was green and the sun was yellow! He didn’t know the word for it yet but he knew that what he saw was different. “What could this be?” Jonas silently asked himself.
Jonas apprehensively moved from the position he was in and looked about. That’s when he saw it. Jonas was dumbfounded. He decided that it was a rainbow. Its beauty was matchless and awe-inspiring! Each color brought a new feeling to Jonas. Yellow made him happy and blue made him sad. It was an exhilarating experience for Jonas, one he would never forget!
Paris Sowell Jonas feels wet, and he sees water falling from the sky. He thinks to himself, “that must be called rain.” After being soaked for what seemed like hours, he saw streaks of color go across the sky, and he started to ponder the, and what were they called, colors, going across the sky. Bright colors like red, yellow, orange, green, blue, and violet. Jonas came to the conclusion that that was a rainbow. He was totally dumbfounded at this. Just then a very intricate thing happened. The colors start to fade away! He was apprehensive at first, but only at first. Who knew that rainbows could disappear? Jonas then realized this was normal. That was the last he saw of the colors.
Dontae walker
A seen the Giver could give to Jonas is a seen about a flood. When Jonas lies down he will slowly start to receive the memory of a flood he will fill the air getting colder and wet and then suddenly the rain will rush down making him completely wet and doused in water. The waves will suddenly form getting louder and louder each splash in a crescendo form and as the current takes him under he feels a sense of helplessness as he slowly goes under the water and just as he is about to drown he hears a loud voice……”Jonas come back!” and just the Jonas takes a deep breath and the memory is over.
Rodney Jonas opened his eyes and looked very dumbfounded to see people on the wood type floor. Also these people were shooting this ball inside of this basket. He saw this sign that said Home of the Boston Celtics so he pondered and thoughtwhat is the Boston Celtics. Then he saw a logo that thought NBA and he said what that is. He says what is the NBA what the Boston is and he hears someone say “The Boston Celtics are the best team in the National Basketball League”. Therefore he says “What is Basketball” but he thinks that this place looks very exhilarating.
Carron
here Joe said Joe looked down and said no the watch it is gone so now what do we do and Sam looked behind her and there was the book he said look it’s the book they all jump for joy but the book did not work they that it needs food to work they gave it so oil made it work and they got home.
Tyrone Mason-Hight
Jonas sees a big house but he didn’t know what ponder , He was dumbfounded so he decided to walk in. Although he wasn’t allowed to walk inside. He was caught trespassing. The owner of the house was so mad that his security guards gave him a chastisement to be the owner’s maid. The owner had Jonas worn out from cleaning, cooking, and obstructing his house.
Quaadir Dunn Jonas feels The givers hands on him. They feel warm at first but that feeling rises. Well, not really. He doesn’t feel “warm” really he feels….. he feels….. “Good”. Then he wakes up in a pure green field. In the distant he sees a women. At first we ponders on what she is doing but then decides to get closer. He starts walking and walking and walking. He stops once he is in viewing range and then sees her with a baby. She is slowly rocking the baby back and forth to sleep. Maybe she’s a Nurturer? “Jonas thinks”. But then he looks closer ay the little baby girl. Then, he is dumbfounded. The little girl and the women look alike! How? “Jonas thinks”. He starts to look around then a million question run through his head Why is the ground…… “Different”? What are these tall “things” that look sort of like the ground? This feeling….. and my Hair! Jonas’s hair was moving even though he was not. Then he closed his eyes…. and heard something. A howling, blowing, sound. He felt cold then a word came to mind. Its…its….. ‘Wind” Jonas decided”. The wind is blowing my hair. He begins to look at the ground. He moves his hand and feels the ground. It feels moist and soft. It felt so nice to him he was about to roll around in it. It also looked “different”. Its like the apple” Jonas concluded” and the people at the ceremony. It has……. “Color” he finally thought. Yes, Its color he repeated but its not just color “ He pondered”. Its…. The word had come to him. “Grass” he said. Yes, this grass has color like the apple and the people at ceremony. Finally, he looked at the tall things (That were taller than him!) that had color like the grass. However. It looked different from the grass. It seemed to be held up by something with color. That “something” was taller than Jonas and felt hard. The top of that something was embossed with what looked like grass. One of them fell and he caught it. It felt crunchy and then it happened. The word “Tree” rushed to his mind and then he heard something. He turned around and saw that same baby with that same women. The baby was crying and they were both now under a Tree, lying on the grass, with the wind blowing. The women was saying something, but he couldn’t hear her. However, the baby stopped crying and started laughing. Then all at once the words he learned formed. Tree , Wind, Grass, and color all rushed to his head. Then he heard the women say something. “Life” she said. Then he got it. “Life” he said. And Then it ended .
Paint by Yunus
Jonas sees Paint for the first time he had to ponder so hard to get the name for this embossed wall He finally got it the name was paint. He finally had a brush to paint the embossed wall. Jonas said it was very intricate to paint. After a couple of minutes he finally started to get the hang of painting walls so he wanted to continue painting the intricate wall. When he finished painting he was dumbfounded of how exhilarating the wall looked. He accidently touched the wet paint and he made a hand print on the wall and he said what is that he pondered of what that thing was. He had the name it was a hand print and he did again to see if that was his. By accident he put the brush in his mouth and he said that tasted nasty and he tried to spit the paint out of his mouth run around the room and he mostly died and the paint can jumped up and dropped the whole can of paint in his mouth The end
Abdul-Qadir
A story of the past
Jonas feel the man’s hand on his back he starts fall into a deep transmission, The next thing he knows he wakes up in the middle of the city and all he has to eat is a burger and fries he also has some water he can’t believe the color he is see’s in the burger red, brown, green and yellow he gets so excited over how many color’s sees he gets dumfounded . then he sees a car he think ponders hard about thinking if he should get in one then a man walks up to Jonas .And he says get away from my car, he asked the man what’s car he say hmfa than Jonas said he would give him all he had if he let him ride in the man’s blue shined car he agrees to let him ride Jonas could not drive so he ran it onto a brick wall Jonas is a little hurt so he gets out of the car, the man was mad he started to show a lot of transgression Jonas tells the man that he will work to pay for the car in exchange for some information about the world. The man told him his name was Bob Jonas said my name is Jonas nice to meet you , Bob told him about the solar system and how every world revolved around it. Bob told him all about the world and how people were in it Jonas asked what community they were in Bob said what’s community Jonas said never mind. After a while Jonas started to understand how things worked Jonas learned about colors apples were red and how orange was a shade of red and that red and blue made purple it was so exhilarating learning .
After all of that Jonas and Bob went to a pizza shop Jonas had notice that pizza was red, orange Jonas smelled the pizza it smelled like red Bob said pizza is not just color its color comes from light without light there is no color . He also told the white light on the ceiling is manmade , Jonas know now that light and color are important Bob and Jonas went to Bobs house for a while Jonas saw the his room was painted red, blue and yellow the three primary colors of pigment. Jonas liked that bob was so creative But knew that this was all memory he told Bob that color were probably as important as the sun its self. Bob explained that color are one of the most important things in the world, Jonas also knew that the answer was color and he went out of the transmission he told the giver he knew the answer. Then he left to go home the giver was very pleased .
Tracey L. Mackey
Time Warp Trio; 2095; Chapter 9
“We’re saved!” we all shouted. We were so excited and full of delight. “Now let’s see here…..” said Uncle Joe, He started to fiddle with some buttons on the watch. “Ah, here we go…” Uncle Joe said and then he pushed in the numbers 1-9-9-5. I felt a bomb of suspense in the giant, sky-high room. The watch started to vibrate and shake and then a loud”POOF!” I opened my eyes and praying that we were back in 1995 but all I saw was our grandkids and Uncle Joe surrounding us.”Ok, I surrender “said Sam. “Stupid time traveling…” Fred muffled under his breath. While Sam and Fred are busy crying over this situation, I’m busy planning my solution to this calamity. “Girls, where is the nearest junk yard?” I said. “Junk yard?” they said. “Well the one I know is a couple miles away said Samantha...” “Let’s go!” I shouted and we rode the jet rail and headed over there. “Ok, let’s see here...” I take a good look at the pile of unwanted garbage.
I pick up a few wires from an old car and managed to rip of its hood. Then, I grabbed a clock, a rusty rench and was ready to work. I connected the cords, bolted the clock to the car hood, programmed it, and made a few other adjustments and bam! We had a time travel hover-board!
“What the….”Said the rest of gang. They were in complete shock. “You dummy, we’re never going to back with this piece of junk!” said Sam. “Just wait.” I said annoyed. “Say your last good-byes and get ready to go back to the past.” The Time Warp Trio all got on. I pushed in the numbers, 1-9-9-5 and the last thing we saw was a blue mist. “You fools, did you finish the worksheet?!?” yelled Mr. Chester “No.” we said in unison. “Ok, detention for all of you.” Mr. Chester said. I didn’t really care about detention I’m just glad to be back.
The End.
Avian King - The Saver Machine
“No”, Joe said “normally when you use something from your uncle who comes and go when he pleases he’s either a fake and it’s a bomb or he’s real and it’s a bomb” dreaded Joe. “Stop exaggerating it’s always something with you” he said, “If you can’t adjust to the fact we have an uncle trying to help us then you shouldn’t have came you know something always happens when we travel”. Sam at that point had left the house with the fake Uncle Joe, Sam, Freddi, and Samantha their evil grand kids. When the boys had discovered that they looked and the watch was gone to it was a trap the fake uncle distracted them and the girls took their brother. They had no way out every door been locked and they were shrinking.
”Now look what you did you shrunk us” said Joe. And the thing about is there was a cat trying to eat them like mice well Fred looks like where stuck here you think said Joe why do you even have the book you always get us in trouble its getting monotonous most people think I should have the book said Joe. You all you want do is study the book would get no use but to see the boring side of Africa and it would be dead of boredom well I should have got the book muffled Joe you cause to much trouble, well they were so busy fighting they had got ate and were standing in the museum fighting in front of Mr. Chester “Boys stop that fighting no need to try and impress me to give you a you all get them for staying with the group were saved they said and there was there brother it was not a trap they did not get in the portal when they were told they could not believe that Mr. Chester did not recognize they were gone.
The End
Isaiah
Time Warp Trio
When Uncle Joe got up the book was underneath him. Joe, Sam, and Fred grabbed The Book and opened it to the page where they typed the numbers and typed the numbers 1995. They got sucked up into a green black hole and everyone around them became mist. When they got back home Sam had a milk accident. Then he discovered how to make people and other things fly and he called them antigravity disks. They were as happy as can be.
Desmond
“But I do not know how to use it”. “We’re d…” “don’t say it your getting monotonous.” Fred said holding his cap in attack position. ‘’What is the time warp watch”? Joe asked. ’’it is a sort of device that time warps I guess”. Uncle Joe said. ‘’Well let’s try pressing this button.’’ Uncle Joe pressed the button and the book appeared. “Oh that’s what it’s for.’’ So they opened the book and pressed in 1-9-9-5. The mist came out of the book. Their great grandchildren waved bye and soon Uncle Joe, Joe, Sam, Fred where at the museum “we’re home”! ‘’The end’’
Kaliyah
The boy decided to fly back to the museum and see if the book was at museum but the book they was looking for was not there so they look for some thing that look like the book they was looking for they seen a book that look like the book they was looking for .Hey look said SAM wow it look like the book we are looking for said JOE yeah we get go home and see are frends and we do not have to eat dog food said FRED.But are we going to see yell said the kids/ kids /kids /kids.Yes said SAM stop said Uncle joe how are we going to get home uncle joe! said Sam Joe Fred.You are going to chant a spell to get us home said JOE what is that sound? What is your number what is your number noooooo said SAM.Did you say something said Joe nooo but he did said Sam what is your number said the Bot.
Ivan
They find out that the book blew up and reformed as a phone that works anywhere, and Uncle Joe’s watch blows up and Uncle Joe becomes sealed in mid-warp where he would fall in one place and adjust how things worked and causes a calamity in some places and in the age of Neanderthals he cause a revolutionary war against the homo-sapiens that reconstructs a different Constitution. Then time warp trio is captured by time police robots with laser Gatling guns and rockets so the run then they float with there devices that allowed them to float in the air they speed away with the robots on there tail!
Ten hours later there in a room with a big desk and a angry Director Green she has time police robots all around the boys they here Uncle Joe brought in struggling and then he sees the boys in chains! that are attached to the rusty shackles then they see Uncle Joe suddenly the phone appears and the pale green mist starts to creep out everyone notices including Director Green and she says well, well, well looks like it’s about to warp you to the 1995 well where coming with you the boys suddenly warp and they land in there’ own time let’s not do that aging said Fred.
Kai
The time warp trio, are stuck in time they met their grandkids in 1995. Uncle Joe has a time watch that can take them home. They met sell- robot who wanted their number. They think it is a time cop but the sell – robot will help them get them home. Sell – robot takes them to repair shop the robot needs help, with Revolutionary time machine he’s been working on. The trio helps the robot. 10 days have passed they finished the time machine. It looked weird but it might help them. But the robot was a monster named cell with a long tail. Sell chased them but they hit him with a pan. With cell knocked out the trio went to the time machine. But then, they did not go in the past cell didn’t tap in the number. They ordered cell top tap in the number .But cell absorbed them but then Goko kicked cell in the face he punched Sell -robot
Isa
Joe said “I want to learn how to fly” he said. “I know how to fly” said Joanie. So Joanie showed Joe how to fly “I want to fly!” I want to fly!” said Joe; “this is getting monotonous” said Joanie. Joe wanted to fly because he wanted to impress his friends Sam and Fred but they weren’t with him, they were at the futures museum and they were looking at exhibits in it. They were also looking at a mannequin in the window of the museum. When Joe was about to fly in the air his mouth was sealed because he was nervous when he flow in the air he impressed himself and then the time warp trio knew how to fly though time.
Nicolette
The time warp trio… someone was spying on them someone not nice. “The Robot.” Fred said.” It can`t be the Robot.”so they went on. Sam was fiddling with his hand.Jo built a house. Then Fred said”your impressing.”so they went in the house.Jo said “don’t for get to seal the door .”so they sealed the door.soon they were in 1995.”that was magic “and they was back at the exhibit. The end.
NáChel
The time warp brought three children to some strange place in 2095 because it was an experiment. So Fred, Sam, and Joe tride to get back to the PRESENT because they were in the FUTURE? But then they lost the BOOK! So then they walked into a room with old fashioned stuff. And then they met a robot that said hey buddy whats your number .And then the robot helped them by eating Sam,Fred,and Joe and when they got in side all they saw was witness.
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Shared below are the students' creative writings! They developed extended scene from either the book The Giver or 2095. Enjoy!
Ali
Jonas woke up, and to his surprise, witnessed gold.He was exhilarated by the amazing reflection of a unique color.
He then pondered to himself, and he knew the color “Yellow”
He saw the rubies with their strong amazing color, and thought to himself “Red”
As a soothing beautiful light reflected through a hallway, he pondered what it was.
He walked through the hallway and saw Sapphires of a relaxing color.
It occurred to him that these strange jewels were “Blue”
He saw another vibrant reflection of another color. He witnessed the radiant emeralds glistening in the light and then knew that the emeralds were “Green”
Darren:
Jonas hears a crescendo of intricate noises. He starts to visualize a house embossed with orange, dark brown trees full of vivid green leaves, and a bright blue sky. Apprehensively, he makes his way towards a window lined with silver and gold banners. Through the window he sees a family sitting at a dinner table. The people are dressed in exhilarating and jaunty colors. Words begin spilling out of Jonas’ mouth at an astounding rate, “Red, blue, yellow, silver, orange, green, pink, purple, black, white, cyan, magenta, grey!” Dumbfounded, he stares meticulously at his surroundings.
Camryn Brown
Inside the dwelling of the old man known as the giver, Jonas is preparing to receive yet another transmission. What would it be this time? Jonas is bubbling over with excitement! Jonas’ steps toward the bed were jaunty and confident.
Once again he felt the hand of the giver on his back. He felt the room suddenly change. It was then when he felt a light drip of water run down his face. He was in an open field. Nothing but grass as far as the eye could see. The ground was wet. Jonas pondered over what the wetness was and from where it came. He concluded that this was rain and that it came from the sky.
All of the sudden he realized that the sky was blue and the grass was green and the sun was yellow! He didn’t know the word for it yet but he knew that what he saw was different. “What could this be?” Jonas silently asked himself.
Jonas apprehensively moved from the position he was in and looked about. That’s when he saw it. Jonas was dumbfounded. He decided that it was a rainbow. Its beauty was matchless and awe-inspiring! Each color brought a new feeling to Jonas. Yellow made him happy and blue made him sad. It was an exhilarating experience for Jonas, one he would never forget!
Paris Sowell
Jonas feels wet, and he sees water falling from the sky. He thinks to himself, “that must be called rain.” After being soaked for what seemed like hours, he saw streaks of color go across the sky, and he started to ponder the, and what were they called, colors, going across the sky. Bright colors like red, yellow, orange, green, blue, and violet. Jonas came to the conclusion that that was a rainbow. He was totally dumbfounded at this. Just then a very intricate thing happened. The colors start to fade away! He was apprehensive at first, but only at first. Who knew that rainbows could disappear? Jonas then realized this was normal. That was the last he saw of the colors.
Dontae walker
A seen the Giver could give to Jonas is a seen about a flood. When Jonas lies down he will slowly start to receive the memory of a flood he will fill the air getting colder and wet and then suddenly the rain will rush down making him completely wet and doused in water. The waves will suddenly form getting louder and louder each splash in a crescendo form and as the current takes him under he feels a sense of helplessness as he slowly goes under the water and just as he is about to drown he hears a loud voice……”Jonas come back!” and just the Jonas takes a deep breath and the memory is over.
RodneyJonas opened his eyes and looked very dumbfounded to see people on the wood type floor. Also these people were shooting this ball inside of this basket. He saw this sign that said Home of the Boston Celtics so he pondered and thoughtwhat is the Boston Celtics. Then he saw a logo that thought NBA and he said what that is. He says what is the NBA what the Boston is and he hears someone say “The Boston Celtics are the best team in the National Basketball League”. Therefore he says “What is Basketball” but he thinks that this place looks very exhilarating.
Carronhere Joe said Joe looked down and said no the watch it is gone so now what do we do and Sam looked behind her and there was the book he said look it’s the book they all jump for joy but the book did not work they that it needs food to work they gave it so oil made it work and they got home.
Tyrone Mason-Hight
Jonas sees a big house but he didn’t know what ponder , He was dumbfounded so he decided to walk in. Although he wasn’t allowed to walk inside. He was caught trespassing. The owner of the house was so mad that his security guards gave him a chastisement to be the owner’s maid. The owner had Jonas worn out from cleaning, cooking, and obstructing his house.
Quaadir Dunn
Jonas feels The givers hands on him. They feel warm at first but that feeling rises. Well, not really. He doesn’t feel “warm” really he feels….. he feels….. “Good”. Then he wakes up in a pure green field. In the distant he sees a women. At first we ponders on what she is doing but then decides to get closer. He starts walking and walking and walking. He stops once he is in viewing range and then sees her with a baby. She is slowly rocking the baby back and forth to sleep. Maybe she’s a Nurturer? “Jonas thinks”. But then he looks closer ay the little baby girl. Then, he is dumbfounded. The little girl and the women look alike! How? “Jonas thinks”. He starts to look around then a million question run through his head Why is the ground…… “Different”? What are these tall “things” that look sort of like the ground? This feeling….. and my Hair! Jonas’s hair was moving even though he was not. Then he closed his eyes…. and heard something. A howling, blowing, sound. He felt cold then a word came to mind. Its…its….. ‘Wind” Jonas decided”. The wind is blowing my hair. He begins to look at the ground. He moves his hand and feels the ground. It feels moist and soft. It felt so nice to him he was about to roll around in it. It also looked “different”. Its like the apple” Jonas concluded” and the people at the ceremony. It has……. “Color” he finally thought. Yes, Its color he repeated but its not just color “ He pondered”. Its…. The word had come to him. “Grass” he said. Yes, this grass has color like the apple and the people at ceremony. Finally, he looked at the tall things (That were taller than him!) that had color like the grass. However. It looked different from the grass. It seemed to be held up by something with color. That “something” was taller than Jonas and felt hard. The top of that something was embossed with what looked like grass. One of them fell and he caught it. It felt crunchy and then it happened. The word “Tree” rushed to his mind and then he heard something. He turned around and saw that same baby with that same women. The baby was crying and they were both now under a Tree, lying on the grass, with the wind blowing. The women was saying something, but he couldn’t hear her. However, the baby stopped crying and started laughing. Then all at once the words he learned formed. Tree , Wind, Grass, and color all rushed to his head. Then he heard the women say something. “Life” she said. Then he got it. “Life” he said. And Then it ended .
Paint by Yunus
Jonas sees Paint for the first time he had to ponder so hard to get the name for this embossed wall He finally got it the name was paint. He finally had a brush to paint the embossed wall. Jonas said it was very intricate to paint. After a couple of minutes he finally started to get the hang of painting walls so he wanted to continue painting the intricate wall. When he finished painting he was dumbfounded of how exhilarating the wall looked. He accidently touched the wet paint and he made a hand print on the wall and he said what is that he pondered of what that thing was. He had the name it was a hand print and he did again to see if that was his. By accident he put the brush in his mouth and he said that tasted nasty and he tried to spit the paint out of his mouth run around the room and he mostly died and the paint can jumped up and dropped the whole can of paint in his mouth The end
Abdul-Qadir
A story of the past
Jonas feel the man’s hand on his back he starts fall into a deep transmission, The next thing he knows he wakes up in the middle of the city and all he has to eat is a burger and fries he also has some water he can’t believe the color he is see’s in the burger red, brown, green and yellow he gets so excited over how many color’s sees he gets dumfounded . then he sees a car he think ponders hard about thinking if he should get in one then a man walks up to Jonas .And he says get away from my car, he asked the man what’s car he say hmfa than Jonas said he would give him all he had if he let him ride in the man’s blue shined car he agrees to let him ride Jonas could not drive so he ran it onto a brick wall Jonas is a little hurt so he gets out of the car, the man was mad he started to show a lot of transgression Jonas tells the man that he will work to pay for the car in exchange for some information about the world. The man told him his name was Bob Jonas said my name is Jonas nice to meet you , Bob told him about the solar system and how every world revolved around it. Bob told him all about the world and how people were in it Jonas asked what community they were in Bob said what’s community Jonas said never mind. After a while Jonas started to understand how things worked Jonas learned about colors apples were red and how orange was a shade of red and that red and blue made purple it was so exhilarating learning .
After all of that Jonas and Bob went to a pizza shop Jonas had notice that pizza was red, orange Jonas smelled the pizza it smelled like red Bob said pizza is not just color its color comes from light without light there is no color . He also told the white light on the ceiling is manmade , Jonas know now that light and color are important Bob and Jonas went to Bobs house for a while Jonas saw the his room was painted red, blue and yellow the three primary colors of pigment. Jonas liked that bob was so creative But knew that this was all memory he told Bob that color were probably as important as the sun its self. Bob explained that color are one of the most important things in the world, Jonas also knew that the answer was color and he went out of the transmission he told the giver he knew the answer. Then he left to go home the giver was very pleased .
Tracey L. Mackey
Time Warp Trio; 2095; Chapter 9
“We’re saved!” we all shouted. We were so excited and full of delight. “Now let’s see here…..” said Uncle Joe, He started to fiddle with some buttons on the watch. “Ah, here we go…” Uncle Joe said and then he pushed in the numbers 1-9-9-5. I felt a bomb of suspense in the giant, sky-high room. The watch started to vibrate and shake and then a loud”POOF!” I opened my eyes and praying that we were back in 1995 but all I saw was our grandkids and Uncle Joe surrounding us.”Ok, I surrender “said Sam. “Stupid time traveling…” Fred muffled under his breath. While Sam and Fred are busy crying over this situation, I’m busy planning my solution to this calamity. “Girls, where is the nearest junk yard?” I said. “Junk yard?” they said. “Well the one I know is a couple miles away said Samantha...” “Let’s go!” I shouted and we rode the jet rail and headed over there. “Ok, let’s see here...” I take a good look at the pile of unwanted garbage.
I pick up a few wires from an old car and managed to rip of its hood. Then, I grabbed a clock, a rusty rench and was ready to work. I connected the cords, bolted the clock to the car hood, programmed it, and made a few other adjustments and bam! We had a time travel hover-board!
“What the….”Said the rest of gang. They were in complete shock. “You dummy, we’re never going to back with this piece of junk!” said Sam. “Just wait.” I said annoyed. “Say your last good-byes and get ready to go back to the past.” The Time Warp Trio all got on. I pushed in the numbers, 1-9-9-5 and the last thing we saw was a blue mist. “You fools, did you finish the worksheet?!?” yelled Mr. Chester “No.” we said in unison. “Ok, detention for all of you.” Mr. Chester said. I didn’t really care about detention I’m just glad to be back.
The End.
Avian King - The Saver Machine
“No”, Joe said “normally when you use something from your uncle who comes and go when he pleases he’s either a fake and it’s a bomb or he’s real and it’s a bomb” dreaded Joe. “Stop exaggerating it’s always something with you” he said, “If you can’t adjust to the fact we have an uncle trying to help us then you shouldn’t have came you know something always happens when we travel”. Sam at that point had left the house with the fake Uncle Joe, Sam, Freddi, and Samantha their evil grand kids. When the boys had discovered that they looked and the watch was gone to it was a trap the fake uncle distracted them and the girls took their brother. They had no way out every door been locked and they were shrinking.
”Now look what you did you shrunk us” said Joe. And the thing about is there was a cat trying to eat them like mice well Fred looks like where stuck here you think said Joe why do you even have the book you always get us in trouble its getting monotonous most people think I should have the book said Joe. You all you want do is study the book would get no use but to see the boring side of Africa and it would be dead of boredom well I should have got the book muffled Joe you cause to much trouble, well they were so busy fighting they had got ate and were standing in the museum fighting in front of Mr. Chester “Boys stop that fighting no need to try and impress me to give you a you all get them for staying with the group were saved they said and there was there brother it was not a trap they did not get in the portal when they were told they could not believe that Mr. Chester did not recognize they were gone.
The End
Isaiah
Time Warp Trio
When Uncle Joe got up the book was underneath him. Joe, Sam, and Fred grabbed The Book and opened it to the page where they typed the numbers and typed the numbers 1995. They got sucked up into a green black hole and everyone around them became mist. When they got back home Sam had a milk accident. Then he discovered how to make people and other things fly and he called them antigravity disks. They were as happy as can be.
Desmond
“But I do not know how to use it”. “We’re d…” “don’t say it your getting monotonous.” Fred said holding his cap in attack position. ‘’What is the time warp watch”? Joe asked. ’’it is a sort of device that time warps I guess”. Uncle Joe said. ‘’Well let’s try pressing this button.’’ Uncle Joe pressed the button and the book appeared. “Oh that’s what it’s for.’’ So they opened the book and pressed in 1-9-9-5. The mist came out of the book. Their great grandchildren waved bye and soon Uncle Joe, Joe, Sam, Fred where at the museum “we’re home”!
‘’The end’’
Kaliyah
The boy decided to fly back to the museum and see if the book was at museum but the book they was looking for was not there so they look for some thing that look like the book they was looking for they seen a book that look like the book they was looking for .Hey look said SAM wow it look like the book we are looking for said JOE yeah we get go home and see are frends and we do not have to eat dog food said FRED.But are we going to see yell said the kids/ kids /kids /kids.Yes said SAM stop said Uncle joe how are we going to get home uncle joe! said Sam Joe Fred.You are going to chant a spell to get us home said JOE what is that sound? What is your number what is your number noooooo said SAM.Did you say something said Joe nooo but he did said Sam what is your number said the Bot.
Ivan
They find out that the book blew up and reformed as a phone that works anywhere, and Uncle Joe’s watch blows up and Uncle Joe becomes sealed in mid-warp where he would fall in one place and adjust how things worked and causes a calamity in some places and in the age of Neanderthals he cause a revolutionary war against the homo-sapiens that reconstructs a different Constitution. Then time warp trio is captured by time police robots with laser Gatling guns and rockets so the run then they float with there devices that allowed them to float in the air they speed away with the robots on there tail!
Ten hours later there in a room with a big desk and a angry Director Green she has time police robots all around the boys they here Uncle Joe brought in struggling and then he sees the boys in chains! that are attached to the rusty shackles then they see Uncle Joe suddenly the phone appears and the pale green mist starts to creep out everyone notices including Director Green and she says well, well, well looks like it’s about to warp you to the 1995 well where coming with you the boys suddenly warp and they land in there’ own time let’s not do that aging said Fred.
Kai
The time warp trio, are stuck in time they met their grandkids in 1995. Uncle Joe has a time watch that can take them home. They met sell- robot who wanted their number. They think it is a time cop but the sell – robot will help them get them home. Sell – robot takes them to repair shop the robot needs help, with Revolutionary time machine he’s been working on. The trio helps the robot. 10 days have passed they finished the time machine. It looked weird but it might help them. But the robot was a monster named cell with a long tail. Sell chased them but they hit him with a pan. With cell knocked out the trio went to the time machine. But then, they did not go in the past cell didn’t tap in the number. They ordered cell top tap in the number .But cell absorbed them but then Goko kicked cell in the face he punched Sell -robot
Isa
Joe said “I want to learn how to fly” he said. “I know how to fly” said Joanie. So Joanie showed Joe how to fly “I want to fly!” I want to fly!” said Joe; “this is getting monotonous” said Joanie. Joe wanted to fly because he wanted to impress his friends Sam and Fred but they weren’t with him, they were at the futures museum and they were looking at exhibits in it. They were also looking at a mannequin in the window of the museum. When Joe was about to fly in the air his mouth was sealed because he was nervous when he flow in the air he impressed himself and then the time warp trio knew how to fly though time.
Nicolette
The time warp trio… someone was spying on them someone not nice. “The Robot.” Fred said.” It can`t be the Robot.”so they went on. Sam was fiddling with his hand.Jo built a house. Then Fred said”your impressing.”so they went in the house.Jo said “don’t for get to seal the door .”so they sealed the door.soon they were in 1995.”that was magic “and they was back at the exhibit. The end.
NáChel
The time warp brought three children to some strange place in 2095 because it was an experiment. So Fred, Sam, and Joe tride to get back to the PRESENT because they were in the FUTURE? But then they lost the BOOK! So then they walked into a room with old fashioned stuff. And then they met a robot that said hey buddy whats your number .And then the robot helped them by eating Sam,Fred,and Joe and when they got in side all they saw was witness.